Inquiry II: Part A
1. Writing Instruction; ‘The 6 Traits of Writing’:
- Ideas
& Content
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Narrow your topic
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Write about what you observe
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Use details to support your point
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Use the five senses to describe
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Organization
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Become an expert on your subject
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Hook your audience with a strong lead
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Link ideas together, and guide your audience with transitions
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Sum up all your ideas, and end with a bang!
- Voice
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Be original with your ideas
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Connect with your audience
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Make your writing “come alive” with feeling and emotion
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Bring your personality out in your writing
- Word
Choice
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Write to your audience
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Be precise and select words that fit your purpose
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Use clear and colorful language to convey mood
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Use powerful verbs and strong adjectives
- Sentence
Fluency
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Vary sentence length and structure
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Start sentences with a variety of first words
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Make smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs
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Read aloud for flow and rhythm
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Conventions
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Follow grammar, spelling, and capitalization rules
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Use paragraph breaks and correct punctuation
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Hunt down errors
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Know and use correct editing symbols
2. I will have between 45 and 50 minutes a day to instruct
my lesson.
3. Common Core Standards include 6th grade
writing standards 4 and 5.
4. In sixth grade, students use writing as a tool to learn,
instead of focusing on learning to write. They use writing in a way that allows
them to explore new content and create their own interpretations of concepts
they encounter….
5. All types of classroom talk take place during this time,
depending on what is taking place. There is initially teacher-led communication
but eventually students will be expected to talk with their peers and also
think for themselves during higher-level thinking activities. It will be
understood that everyone is to contribute to the group conversations, each
bringing their own opinion to the table. No one’s interpretation will be
considered right or wrong, and everyone will have an opportunity to be heard.
6. The ‘Core Practice’ I hope to develop through teaching
this target area of Writing Instruction is “fostering meaningful revision
practices”. Writing is a life-long area where one can continue to learn, and
focusing on this ‘core practice’ as a professional learner will hopefully both
better my understanding of the six traits of writing, and also improve my
writing overall. Revision is a crucial skill within the writing process, and I
feel like the better I, and my students, are able to grasp this and master this
process, the better their own writing, and mine, will become. If you, as an
editor, know what to look for and what is needed in a given piece of writing, it
makes it easier for you to produce writing that contains these things.
7. Ideas and inspiration for writing can be pulled from
anywhere in the world around us, and students will be able to use their own
funds of knowledge while mastering these six traits. The community and
neighborhoods they live in and where they spend time outside of school, and the
school and classrooms they visit every day. Each of these places provides me,
as a teacher, with ideas to incorporate into relevant writing activities, and
provides my students with experiences worthy of putting into a piece of
writing. I can also use newspapers, letters, or local restaurant menus as
examples of kinds of writing in everyday life.
8. Additional resources I might consider using throughout
the unit are samples of my own sixth grade writing. I don’t know that it will
necessarily aid in my teaching, but I think it might be fun to share that piece
of my past with my students and show them that I was once in their shoes and
understand that learning these writing traits takes time. Also, as a learner, I
appreciate seeing samples and know my options before constructing my own work,
so perhaps seeing some of my writing could inspire my students.
9. Pre-assessments for teaching the six traits of writing
will include obtaining several samples of writing; letters, poems, etc. Also,
in the beginning of the year my students filled out both reading and writing
surveys that addressed thoughts about writing including:
> Are
you a writer?
> Why do
people write? List as many reasons as you can think of.
> What
does someone have to do or know in order to write well?
> How do you decide what you’ll
write about? Where do your ideas come from?
> In general, how do you feel
about what you write?
Starting by reading through these surveys, I hope to gain a
better understanding of how my class thinks and feels about writing. From this
stage I hope to administer a fairly general writing prompt of my own, asking
what they feel the six most important traits of writing are, or if they are
already known, which of them do they find most helpful in their own writing.
10. The more I am able to find out about my students hobbies
and interests, the better I will be able to shape and develop my lesson plans
for this unit. Getting to know their daily schedules and where and how they
spend their time outside of school allows me to get to know them as
individuals, and therefore better plan how I construct classroom activities.
Its also helpful to take the time to get to know my students because when the
time comes that I am the lead teacher, I will hopefully have gained some
respect from them. They will see that I am interested in what they have to say
and care about them and their learning, hopefully translating into them
actively participating in my lessons.
11. I hope to obtain different samples of writing and then
practice revising them considering each writing assignment will require unique
revisions. There is not one single rubric to follow that will say that is or is
not “good” writing, so learning how to revise different styles of writing is an
important skill to work on. Also, as part of my lesson, I plan on my students
being able to revise different styles of writing, hopefully improving their
editing skills overall.
12. So far, I don’t have many concerns about planning and
teaching this unit, but I’m sure that as time goes on and I begin to plan more
in-depth, questions and concerns will arise.
I like how you posted all the parts of the 6 traits of writing. This makes it very clear what big ideas you plan to teach in your lessons. You have a very detailed description, as to why this topic is important nd why you want to teach it. You make a good point that getting to know your students both personally and academically will help you to craft a more personalized and effective lesson unit.
ReplyDeleteMadi, I like your idea of showing the students your own 6th grade writing. They will love it! You can also use your writing to model the revision process. A few things to consider if you plan to teach the revision process through the six traits: The first five traits of writing are connected to revision (conventions is connected to the editing process), and each one is dependent upon the genre, purpose and audience to whom the student is writing. Will you focus on a specific genre each day or 1-2 genres over the two week period? Does the 45-50 minutes include the students' writing time?
ReplyDeleteI really thought you made a good point when talk ing about how there is not one single rubric to say whether a piece of writing is good or not. As the chapter in writing essentials talks about, you can use multiple types of rubrics. It may be a good idea to develop a contents rubric, as well as an evalutaion rubric when grading a students writing. While it is important for the student to meet all content requirements when creating a piece of writing, it is equally important for the student to create a high quality, engaging paper. While, I agree with the chapter when it says rubrics can undermine the validity of a childs writing, i do believe it is important for there to be some kind of way to score a students writing. If there ar no content expectations then there should at least be some way to evaluate the quality of the writin, so that the students have a goal to work on and better themselves as writers.
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